When I began reading Michelle West's The Sun Sword, some fans claimed that it was a better starting point than Hunter's Oath. They opined that as West's first work, the Sacred Hunt duology wasn't as well written as everything which came after. And yet, though some readers consider it the author's weakest Essalieyan novel, I enjoyed Hunter's Oath a lot more than I thought I would. There was a much tighter focus to the writing, which the rest of the saga lacks.
I was looking forward to Hunter's Death, even if Gilliam and Stephen were leaving Breodanir behind. Imagine my surprise when I discovered that a good chunk of this book turned out to be Jewel's origin story. So, not only do you get that tale in this second installment, but you also revisit it in the first three House War volumes, only to be reminded of it in every single novel that comes after. To say that it's over-the-top in execution would be a gross understatement. Regardless of Jewel's importance in the greater scheme of things, and she is extremely important, I still can't fathom why so much focus and repetition were deemed necessary.
Thankfully, it wasn't a deal-breaker for me. In the end, Hunter's Death chronicles the events that made that infamous month of Henden in Averalaan the turning point in mankind's history as the Lord of the Hells attempts to touch the world once more. That period is alluded to several times in both the Sun Sword and the House War series, so it was nice to find out what happened underneath the capital.
Here's the blurb:
Averalaan—the most ancient of cities, had long been the home of magics both dark and bright. For the site where this most civilized city of mortals now stood had once been a dread place indeed, a citadel of evil ruled by the Lord of the Hells. Only through the greatest of sacrifices had he been contained and cast back into his own dimension. And though the passing centuries had all but obliterated the memories of that terrible time, trouble was once again stirring in the hidden byways of Averalaan.
The first warning that the Dark Lord’s minions were at work came from a pack of street rats led by a young woman gifted with the ability to see the truth even when it was hidden behind carefully spell-crafted illusions. And as she carried her warning to The Terafin, head of one of the most powerful families in the land, others, too, were rallying to Averalaan’s aid.
Blessed or cursed by their Hunter God and gifted with his most unique creation, the Hunter Lord Gilliam and his huntbrother Stephen were about to do the unthinkable. Guided by the seer Evayne, they would journey beyond the borders of their kingdom, something no Hunter Lord had ever done. For only in Averalaan could they find their true destiny, even if it meant facing the Dark Lord himself…
Now that I've read both volumes of the Sacred Hunt duology, I can confirm that it's not a good entry point for potential readers. In many ways, it's even worse than Steven Erikson's Gardens of the Moon. But with The Malazan Book of the Fallen, you don't really have a choice. With Michelle West, I agree that it's better to either start with the Sun Sword or the House War series. Since the Breodanir storyline has nothing to do with these two series, other than the secrets behind Evayne's rings and Kallandras' past, which will be unveiled at some point in any case, the rest of the Essalieyan saga provides much depth and better context that you won't find in the Sacred Hunt. Indeed, I believe that I've enjoyed the duology as much as I did because I know the stakes and I understand how the major plotlines will converge in the future. This knowledge gave me a deeper appreciation for what Michelle West is trying to establish early on. I was impressed by the fact that certain storylines that would only come together more than two decades later were already mapped out and put into play.
In my review of Hunter's Oath, I said that as the first book in a saga that is now comprised of seventeen novels and several short stories, there was an absence of the scope and vision that made so many storylines in the following series such compelling reads. Michelle West's worldbuilding is what made the Essalieyan saga so amazing in the past, and you could see her placing pieces on the board that will have dire repercussions down the line. With the plot now moving to Averalaan, the author ups her game quite a bit in that regard. I also have a feeling that, even though most of the major storylines were mapped out at that point, West didn't know exactly how the overall story arc would progress from book to book. As a result, some closely guarded secrets such as who and what the Sleepers are, are disclosed openly within the pages of Hunter's Death while their identity and background aren't mentioned at all until you get quite far into the House War novels. I found that very interesting.
As I've said before, characterization is what ultimately sunk the House War series. Alas, the poor characterization and the weird choice of perspectives often undermined what should have been key and emotionally charged moments. As was the case with its predecessor, I have a feeling that her editor didn't give her as much leeway as she would in the future, which explains the tight focus and the smaller number of POV characters. Moving the plot to Averalaan meant that we'd lose the perspectives of Lady Elseth and Cynthia. Which is too bad, as they added layers to the tale. My favorite aspect of the characterization is the fact that Evayne's POV definitely humanizes her as a protagonist. Reading her perspective gives her a dimension that the seemingly cold-hearted seer never gets in the rest of the Essalieyan saga. I know that there are already way too many POVs in these books, but I believe that the story would benefit from Evayne's perspective from time to time. Hunter's Death does the same, but to a lesser degree, with Kallandras and Meralonne APhaniel. It made me appreciate them both even more, especially given the foreshadowing regarding the bard and the magic-user.
Though Hunter's Oath was by no means a fast-paced affair, West keept the story moving at a good clip. This second volume doesn't move as fluidly as the first installment, but I wouldn't say that it suffers from some pacing issues. Understandably, I had a problem with the sections focusing on Jewel and her den, but we all know by now that I'm biased in that regard. So your mileage will vary.
With the Sacred Hunt under my belt, I'm excited to give Hunter's Redoubt a shot. The End of Days is nigh and I'm curious to see what Michelle West has in store for us!
The final verdict: 8/10
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